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                 <p>Well seasoned (aka experienced) Senior Software Engineer specialized in full stack web application development. Having used numerous front-end libraries 
                     (knockout.js, Angular.js, Angular, Backbone) as well as writing appropriate middleware and APIs to interface to backend logic (and no I don't mean tons 
                     of T-SQL, Stored Procedures and other MSSQL dependent features, which I can do, have done, I just don't feel that modern day applications need that legacy to attempt 
-                    to move forward given all the NO-SQL options available - especially when companies refuse to purchase appropriate version tools for SQL scripts such as Red Gate). 
-                    I have experienced a wide variety of challenges over my career.
+                    to move forward given all the NO-SQL options available - especially when companies refuse to version control their SQL Databases and rely on inline comments for such - as has been my experience
+                    through numerous companies).  I have experienced a wide variety of challenges over my career.
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                     From building the first successful production deployment of both hardware and software for the Professional Bull Riders first entry to live sports scoring