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@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
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-  Ensure your embedded devices are fully secure and compliant with cybersecurity regulations with Ubuntu Pro for Devices. Upgrade your desktop or server images today for 10 years of security maintenance and updates.
+  Ubuntu Pro for devices is a straightforward solution for IoT security which allows customers with embedded IoT devices to upgrade their desktop or server images to Pro to ESM, application updates and device management with landscape.
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@@ -21,14 +21,14 @@
     <section class="p-strip p-suru">
       <div class="row">
         <div class="col-medium-6 col-9 col-start-large-4">
-          <h1>Ubuntu Pro for Devices</h1>
+          <h1>IoT security with Ubuntu Pro for Devices</h1>
           <h2>
             Pay a one&ndash;time&ndash;fee per device and
             <br />
             get 10 years of security maintenance.
           </h2>
-          <p>Ideal to comply with the Cyber Resilience Act and other regulations.</p>
-          <a href="/pro/devices#get-in-touch" class="p-button--positive">Get in touch to learn more</a>
+          <p>In a single subscription, benefit from patching for over 25,000 packages, and harness automation tools for compliance with multiple standards, including the Cyber Resilience Act.</p>
+          <a href="/pro/devices#get-in-touch" class="p-button--positive">Contact us</a>
         </div>
       </div>
     </section>
@@ -40,10 +40,11 @@ <h2>Why Ubuntu Pro for Devices?</h2>
         </div>
         <div class="col-6 col-medium-3">
           <ul class="p-list--divided">
-            <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">Get fixes for critical vulnerabilities in under 24hrs</li>
+            <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">Get fixes for critical vulnerabilities in under 24 hours</li>
             <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">Make your compliance efforts faster and easier</li>
             <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">Device management and patching automation included</li>
             <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">Long-term maintenance for real-time kernel and ROS</li>
+            <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">A single subscription for fleet-wide IoT security</li>
           </ul>
         </div>
       </div>
@@ -61,7 +62,7 @@ <h2>For secure and compliant IoT device deployments</h2>
           <div class="p-section--shallow">
             <div>
               <p>
-                89% of IoT companies say that their devices have been hit by a cyber attack, with cyber crime costing roughly 5.5 million a year on a global scale. With Ubuntu Pro you have:
+                Security in IoT is a widespread concern, and with good reason. 89% of IoT companies say that their devices have been hit by a cyber attack, with cyber crime costing roughly 5.5 million a year on a global scale. With Ubuntu Pro you have:
               </p>
               <div>
                 <div class="row">
@@ -134,7 +135,7 @@ <h2>Pull all your software from a secure source</h2>
       </div>
       <div class="u-fixed-width">
         <p>
-          Access 25,000+ open source applications, already built into your development environment and benefit from updates and security patches for the applications you use on your device.
+          Access 25,000+ open source applications, already built into your development environment and benefit from updates and security patches for the applications you use on your device. It's secure IoT, as standard.
         </p>
         <div class="p-logo-section--dense">
           <div class="p-logo-section__items">
@@ -271,7 +272,7 @@ <h2>Develop at speed with the Ubuntu ecosystem</h2>
           <p>
             Use Ubuntu Pro on certified hardware from
             <br />
-            our vast ecosystem of partners to benefit
+            our vast ecosystem of partners and benefit
             <br />
             from:
           </p>
@@ -279,9 +280,9 @@ <h2>Develop at speed with the Ubuntu ecosystem</h2>
         <div class="col-6">
           <ul class="p-list--ticked">
             <li class="p-list__item">
-              <p class="p-heading--5 u-no-margin--bottom">Optimised Ubuntu images</p>
+              <p class="p-heading--5 u-no-margin--bottom">Optimized Ubuntu images</p>
               <p>
-                Certified devices have optimised Ubuntu images and are tested for reliability and performance, ensuring you have the best out-of-the-box experience.
+                Certified devices have optimized Ubuntu images and are tested for reliability and performance, ensuring you have the best out-of-the-box experience.
               </p>
             </li>
             <li class="p-list__item">
@@ -309,10 +310,10 @@ <h2>Meet your compliance requirements faster</h2>
         </div>
         <div class="col-6">
           <p>
-            Ubuntu Pro includes automation tooling and  packages for FIPS 140, CIS and DISA-STIG hardening. Canonical is also committed to comply with the Cyber Resilience Act.
+            Ubuntu Pro includes automation tooling and  packages for FIPS 140, CIS and DISA-STIG hardening. Canonical is also committed to compliance with the Cyber Resilience Act.
           </p>
           <p>
-            Ubuntu has an EAL2 certification recognised by EU members of SOGIS, a platform that harmonises security certification across Europe.
+            Ubuntu has an EAL2 certification recognised by EU members of SOGIS, a platform that harmonizes security certification across Europe.
           </p>
           <p>Meet the most rigorous standards:</p>
           <ul class="p-list--ticked--small">
@@ -343,7 +344,7 @@ <h2>
         </div>
         <div class="col-6">
           <p>Remotely monitor, update and manage IoT devices with a clearly defined rollout policy.</p>
-          <p>Landscape reduces the cost of managing open source:</p>
+          <p>Landscape reduces the cost of managing open source and enables you to proactively manage security for your IoT devices:</p>
           <ul class="p-list--ticked--small">
             <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">
               Get a single pane of glass for managing any Ubuntu instances including system containers, virtual machines, and physical nodes.