diff --git a/for-review/draft-homburg-deleg-incremental-deleg.html b/for-review/draft-homburg-deleg-incremental-deleg.html index bceeb17..cb66d3f 100644 --- a/for-review/draft-homburg-deleg-incremental-deleg.html +++ b/for-review/draft-homburg-deleg-incremental-deleg.html @@ -1518,7 +1518,7 @@

The number of round trips form the recursive resolver to the authoritative name server is comparable to what is needed for DNS Query Name Minimisation [RFC9156]. Additional implementation in the authoritative name server optimizes resolution and reduces the number of simultaneous in parallel queries to that what would be needed for legacy delegations. None, mixed or full deployment of the mechanism on authoritative name servers are all fully functional, allowing for the mechanism to be incrementally deployed on the authoritative name servers.

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Implementation in the recursive may be less demanding with respect to (among other things) DNSSEC validation because of not making additional exceptions to what is authoritative at the parent side of a delegation.

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Implementation in the recursive may be less demanding with respect to (among other things) DNSSEC validation because there is no need to make additional exceptions as to what is authoritative at the parent side of a delegation.

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dohpath=/dns-query{?dns} ) IN RRSIG SVCB ... - IN NSEC customer5 RRSIG NSEC SVCB + IN NSEC customer7._deleg RRSIG NSEC SVCB IN RRSIG NSEC ... customer7._deleg IN CNAME customer5._deleg diff --git a/for-review/draft-homburg-deleg-incremental-deleg.txt b/for-review/draft-homburg-deleg-incremental-deleg.txt index 9612e4f..29e4842 100644 --- a/for-review/draft-homburg-deleg-incremental-deleg.txt +++ b/for-review/draft-homburg-deleg-incremental-deleg.txt @@ -202,9 +202,9 @@ Table of Contents incrementally deployed on the authoritative name servers. Implementation in the recursive may be less demanding with respect to - (among other things) DNSSEC validation because of not making - additional exceptions to what is authoritative at the parent side of - a delegation. + (among other things) DNSSEC validation because there is no need to + make additional exceptions as to what is authoritative at the parent + side of a delegation. 1.5. Terminology @@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ Table of Contents dohpath=/dns-query{?dns} ) IN RRSIG SVCB ... - IN NSEC customer5 RRSIG NSEC SVCB + IN NSEC customer7._deleg RRSIG NSEC SVCB IN RRSIG NSEC ... customer7._deleg IN CNAME customer5._deleg diff --git a/index.html b/index.html index a4d8469..2da6945 100644 --- a/index.html +++ b/index.html @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@

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